Ebeeto's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[what is this i dont even]

Takes me back...

Oh, if those blue bastards would do stuff like this in the original SkiFree. Blow up that Yeti like there's no tomorrow.

Good work.

Short-Factor responds:

yeah to fuck with him

[Stickman YoYo]

Two words: Too short...

This certainly has potential. The animation style and the feel to the whole movie was very professional. But how long was it? A couple of seconds? I suggest you use this and make it longer.

When the movie started rolling, I was expecting a 2-3 minute thing where he's trying to get that jojo to work. If you just put a bit more effort into it and make it longer, it's a great submission.

Also, you might want to consider using another character than the stickman. Sticks have been used too much already, and you should have something better, really...

Still, congrats. Good base.

sexysexybicycle responds:

This cartoon achived what it was supposed to. I wanted to do a simple gag with a simple character, and that's what I did. I didn't want to drag it out just for the sake of making it longer. I'll difinatley make longer cartoons in the future, but this one is fine the way it is. Thanks for your suggestions though.

[S.M.W The Movie Pt.1!]

I think it's a bit too slow...

It's too slow. There's not much happening, just the same music in the background and some slow dialogue. Nothing's realy happened, so I don't see why I would want to watch the next part. Maybe just to see Bowser rape Peach... Um...

Nah, I don't think this'll go through...

funkyjunky responds:

First of all there are 3 different mario tracks...

Belive me Part 2 is going to be much better. If you hadnt noticed this was originally a test to see what i could do with the new flash 8 functions!

Thankyou for your comment and i hope you do watch part 2 :)

[Bbq walking down the park]

I hope for god's sake this doesn't make it through

There's already so many crappy barbeque-flashes that you've been spewing out. This one was not at all fun. You actually used Bohemian Rhapsody in such a "hello, this took 15 minutes to make"-piece of crap. Also, it's a bit racist, a bit stupid and a whole lot of boring. Neat recepie... Stop making these...

Bbqbeefburgerman responds:

BO-HOOO

BO-HOOOOO

Right now it appears to pass.

[Amateur Minute 7]

Really nice.

"Vad många fina flickor det var här inne..."
It's acceptably often you see swedish songs or speech in flashmovies on Newgrounds... Sweet. Really nice random humor.

Lord-Sonx responds:

swedish is fun :P

[A Bunch of NESsed Up Crap]

Great first submission!

Great jokes. Some of them got me laughing in my chair. During the Duckhunt scene, I was sure it was gonna end with the dog being shot, and when the Ice Climber guys rushed him I was really surprised.

The graphics where just what to expect and you had gotten a lot of stuff to look like the originals. That's great. The dialogue-system was a little rusty, though. During the Castlevania scene two bubbles of text appeared at the same time and dissappeared too fast, but I guess that's what you did to get it done in time. It might have been a better idea if you used classic text boxes instead, or even a voice over. The bubbles looked a little mis-placed.

And I felt that the different scenes were quite different in terms of class. Some of them where plain while some were "LOL" and "LMAO" as the kids say... Maybe you should go through your jokes next time and kinda clean up. It was still a lot of fun, looking at it in a big perspective...

Anyhow, it's a great first timer and in general a good submission. Keep up the good work and I'd love to see a sequel to this madness!

Gunstar-X responds:

Thanks alot, I appreciate this review, very helpful. As for the Speech Bubbles, I'm quite fond of Comic Type speech bubbles, but you were right in the fact that I rushed them, and didn't refine it enough. The Ice Climbers....they are little demons, I swear to god...